Texto do aluno Adriel Bernardo; perfeito exemplo de texto para o TOEFL

Job wars

In the old years, a lot of kids went to school and after going home they slept, played soccer and had a great time with their friends. Nowadays, it has changed a little. They go to specialization courses hoping to become outstanding professionals. It is not mostly teens who want it. Many of youngsters prefer to stay at home playing video games, accessing Facebook, using internet rather than preparing their future.

When going to courses, we must know we will have classmates. It is nice to have friends. These friends will be good professionals just like you. They also want to get good job. Here war begins. Battling is part of men´s nature. We fought our way into the womb. Not only human being but animals fight too. When a lion is hungry it must hunt to kill its hunger. Such is the nature of human condition. War is a necessary evil so we can tell the winners from the losers. Getting a job is a war. There are a lot of people in the line hoping to get the job but just a couple will get it. There is justice and fairness on it. If you studied so much you must want to get good job.

Another important aspect about getting a job is the contacts. You are who you know. Contacts are a very important to get a job or whatever you want. For instance, I want to buy a car but I do not have much experience to do that. “What should I do?” I might start by asking some advice. My contacts will be more than happy to help me. The same happens with job seeking. You might not know the boss yourself. However there is always someone who will know him. Use you contacts wisely.  

Nowadays, it is common to have many people in search of employment. These wars are necessary to see who is the most fitting for the opening. If you want the job you will have to battle. War awaits you. Just don´t forget to use your weapons.  You weapons are your contacts. They will be willing to help you when you are in need. Gather these contacts and get ready for this war.