Divide the letter into 6 paragraph and put in the 9

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The Practical Part of the Letter 63 Wood Road, Beechhill, Co. Monaghan 26 June 2006

The Manager Jean World Castletown, Co. Monaghan

Dear Sir/Madam,

I wish to apply for the position of shop assistant as advertised in the 'Evening Herald' on 25 June. I am fifteen years old and have just completed the third year at Brooklawn Community College. I received the Junior Certificate in English, Mathematics, Irish, Business Studies, Home Economics, French, and Art.

For the past two years, I have had a part-time job in a local newsagent where I gained experience working with the public, keeping shelves stocked, and dealing with cash. My interests include football, music, and clothes. I am a member of my local football club.

I can supply references from the Principal of my secondary school and from the Manager of Newstime shop, Mr. P. Wright. I am available for an interview at any time.

Yours faithfully,

Keith Lyons

Olá, Vasconcelos!

Conseguimos resolver a questão de forma simples:

"63 wood road, Beach Hill, Co. Momaghan. 

26 June 2006 The Manager, Jean World, Casteltown, Co. Monaghan 

Dear Sir/ Madam, 

I wish to apply for the position of shop assistant as advertised in the evening herald’ on 25 June. I am fifteen years old, and have just completed third year in Brooklawn Community College. I received the junior certificate in English, Mathematics, Irish, business studies, home economics, French and art. 

For the past two years, I have had a part-time job in a local newsagent where I gained experience of working with the public, keeping shelves stocked, and dealing with cash. My interests are football, music and clothes. I am a member of my local football club. I can supply References from the principal of my secondary school and from the manager of Newstime Shop, Mr. P. Wright. 

I am available for interview at any time. 

Yours faithfully, 

Keith lyons"

63 Wood Road Beechhill Co. Monaghan June 26, 2006

The Manager Jean World Castletown Co. Monaghan

Dear Sir/Madam,

I wish to apply for the position of shop assistant as advertised in the "Evening Herald" on June 25. I am fifteen years old and have just completed the third year at Brooklawn Community College. I received the Junior Certificate in English, Mathematics, Irish, Business Studies, Home Economics, French, and Art.

For the past two years, I have had a part-time job at a local newsagent where I gained experience in working with the public, keeping shelves stocked, and handling cash. My interests include football, music, and clothing. I am a member of my local football club.

I can provide references from the principal of my secondary school and from the manager of Newstime shop, Mr. P. Wright. I am available for an interview at any time.

Yours faithfully,

Keith Lyons

Bom dia Vasconcelos,

A sua solicitação não é apenas um tira-dúvida  O que você pede aqui é a resolução de uma tarefa. 

Se for uma questão pontual, você pode abrir um pedido de tarefa, porém se for necessidade de compreensão do idioma você pode se dedicar a aprender com um dos inúmeros professores que existem nesta plataforma.

Boa sorte

63 Wood Road Beechhill Co. Monaghan June 26, 2006

The Manager Jean World Castletown Co. Monaghan

Dear Sir/Madam,

I wish to apply for the position of shop assistant as advertised in the "Evening Herald" on June 25. I am fifteen years old and have just completed the third year at Brooklawn Community College. I received the Junior Certificate in English, Mathematics, Irish, Business Studies, Home Economics, French, and Art.

For the past two years, I have had a part-time job at a local newsagent where I gained experience in working with the public, keeping shelves stocked, and handling cash. My interests include football, music, and clothes. I am a member of my local football club.

I can provide references from the principal of my secondary school and from the manager of Newstime shop, Mr. P. Wright. I am available for an interview at any time.

Yours faithfully,

Keith Lyons

The Practical Part of the Letter 63 Wood Road, Beechhill, Co. Monaghan. 26 June 2006

The Manager, Jean World, Castltown, Co. Monaghan

Dear Sir/Madam,

I wish to apply for the position of shop assistant as advertised in the Evening Herald on 25 June. I am fifteen years old, and have just completed third year in Brooklawn Community College. I received the Junior Certificate in English, Mathematics, Irish, Business Studies, Home Economics, French, and Art.

For the past two years, I have had a part-time job in a local newsagent where I gained experience of working with the public, keeping shelves stocked, and dealing with cash. My interests are football, music, and clothes. I am a member of my local football club.

I can supply references from the Principal of my secondary school and from the Manager of Newstime shop, Mr. P. Wright. I am available for an interview at any time.

Yours faithfully,

Keith Lyons